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History
Year 10
Satisfactory
Extended response: Responsibility for the outbreak of World War II
Annotations overview
Composes an appropriately structured text to convey historical information and argument

Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time 2 Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources 4 Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past 5 Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence 6 Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time -
2
Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect -
3
Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources -
4
Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past -
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Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence -
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Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past
Above satisfactory
Extended response: Responsibility for the outbreak of World War II
Annotations overview
Composes an appropriately structured text to convey historical information and argument

Makes connections between a range of historical actions, events and developments 2 Annotation 2
Analyses the relationship between cause and effect 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and makes a direct connection between the source and the historical argument 4 Annotation 4
Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Makes connections between a range of historical actions, events and developments -
2
Annotation 2
Analyses the relationship between cause and effect -
3
Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and makes a direct connection between the source and the historical argument -
4
Annotation 4
Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past

Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past 2 Annotation 2
Uses data to justify an opinion 3 Annotation 3
Presents an argument supported by multiple pieces of evidence 4 Annotation 4
Creates a detailed text which draws a complex conclusion about the past
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past -
2
Annotation 2
Uses data to justify an opinion -
3
Annotation 3
Presents an argument supported by multiple pieces of evidence -
4
Annotation 4
Creates a detailed text which draws a complex conclusion about the past
Satisfactory
Extended response: Responsibility for the outbreak of World War II
Annotations overview
Composes an appropriately structured text to convey historical information and argument

Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time 2 Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources 4 Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past 5 Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence 6 Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past
-
Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time -
2
Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect -
3
Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources -
4
Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past -
5
Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence -
6
Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past